hold me a little longer love/let my sorrow sink into you/and my tears mingle with your lips/let me love you more/hold me a little longer love

when i say i have had enough/tell me i need to live/take my hand/lead me into the wilderness/listen to my silence

build me a house/ stay with me forever/never leave me alone love/never!

look into my eyes/say you will be there/nomatterwhat/and say that again/and again...

let me never feel insecure/abandoned, alone/the only feel that may reside in my heart/should be that of love/your love

assure me that/i would never have to be out there/dying in thirst/in the heat and the sun

promise me that i will /always have your arms/to snuggle upto

nomatterwhat/never let go love/never let go

hold me a little longer love/hold me forever

11 comments:

d SINNER!!! said...

Hats off to u fr sucha wondrful composition....

Standbymind said...

hold me forever..forever n ever!!

wah wah Eva..kya baat hain!

Mez said...

Love Delirium of sorts..

no reply to my comment on ur previous post?

Smruti Ranjan said...

"my tears mingle with your lips"
the only line I could not make out..

ur blog is a fine school to learn romance aur precisely female feelings

wildflower said...

@ d sinner
Thank you!

@ Aman
haan haan , baat to hain! :P

@ mez
well love isn't all goody goody...u knw dat, dun u?

@ Smruti
He could be kissing her tears away..?

romance is fine but precise female feelings was belittling!
But then I thot Jane Austen..LoL

vitruvian said...

*sigh* *long sigh*
is all i'm capable of saying...

abhimir said...

great post...
reminded me of a poem i had written a long long time ago... brought back sweet memories of first love...
i cried myself to sleep, happy to be alive again...
and happy valentine's day...

Amrita Sabat said...

dis one ran thru my blood then reached my heart and churned my soul and reverberated myself with emotions. hw can u touch my heart & soul lik dis??

wildflower said...

@ vitruvian
*long sigh****

@ abhimir
Happy Valentine's Day :)

@ amrita
It's just that we connect...
And I am so-so glad we do so!

Niva said...

elegance of a warrior-princess-sword in your words...they cut thru our hearts mercilessly....
beautiful !!

nOt anyone you know said...

another classic!