hold me a little longer love/let my sorrow sink into you/and my tears mingle with your lips/let me love you more/hold me a little longer love

when i say i have had enough/tell me i need to live/take my hand/lead me into the wilderness/listen to my silence

build me a house/ stay with me forever/never leave me alone love/never!

look into my eyes/say you will be there/nomatterwhat/and say that again/and again...

let me never feel insecure/abandoned, alone/the only feel that may reside in my heart/should be that of love/your love

assure me that/i would never have to be out there/dying in thirst/in the heat and the sun

promise me that i will /always have your arms/to snuggle upto

nomatterwhat/never let go love/never let go

hold me a little longer love/hold me forever

11 comments:

  1. Hats off to u fr sucha wondrful composition....

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  2. hold me forever..forever n ever!!

    wah wah Eva..kya baat hain!

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  3. Love Delirium of sorts..

    no reply to my comment on ur previous post?

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  4. "my tears mingle with your lips"
    the only line I could not make out..

    ur blog is a fine school to learn romance aur precisely female feelings

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  5. @ d sinner
    Thank you!

    @ Aman
    haan haan , baat to hain! :P

    @ mez
    well love isn't all goody goody...u knw dat, dun u?

    @ Smruti
    He could be kissing her tears away..?

    romance is fine but precise female feelings was belittling!
    But then I thot Jane Austen..LoL

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  6. *sigh* *long sigh*
    is all i'm capable of saying...

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  7. great post...
    reminded me of a poem i had written a long long time ago... brought back sweet memories of first love...
    i cried myself to sleep, happy to be alive again...
    and happy valentine's day...

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  8. dis one ran thru my blood then reached my heart and churned my soul and reverberated myself with emotions. hw can u touch my heart & soul lik dis??

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  9. @ vitruvian
    *long sigh****

    @ abhimir
    Happy Valentine's Day :)

    @ amrita
    It's just that we connect...
    And I am so-so glad we do so!

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  10. elegance of a warrior-princess-sword in your words...they cut thru our hearts mercilessly....
    beautiful !!

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