A dusk
Sunset has colored the sky
And we're biking into infinity

A speed so high
That I cant breathe anymore
That the wind pierces into my skin

To breakfree
I let my hands off your shoulders
Stretch them out and scream our names

I wait
For my voice to strike a mountain
And come back to me

But sad
Our names get lost in the air
I bite my lips & you turn back

Your small eyes
A spark of mischief in them
And you gimme goosebumps

I die
When your lips twist
And the smile reaches the whole of your cheeks

Later
I smile to myself
And I pat my back, I've loved a rebel

18 comments:

  1. wow.. just wow.. a biking-love poem... i loved the mental image of a couple, pillion stretching her hands apart...biking to infinity... :)
    nice one da...

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  2. beautiful...splendid..took my heart away.. wow,,,

    n me being a biker.. it just stood on my imaginative grounds.. i am jealous of the picture this poem portrays...

    beautiful yaa..!

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  3. romantic.. brilliant

    an imaginative mind...

    a very beautiful poem...
    and the careful choice of words bring such a vivid set of actions like a 10 secs motion picture..

    long live wildflower!! :)

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  4. read this..
    re-read..

    looked into monitor for 10 minutes doing noting..
    and then went into some other universe..

    there is a world that we all dream, a world we love, a world that comes to us...

    a world that does not stay..

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  5. wow....

    loving bikes more then men that ride them, i felt it all...

    the imagination holds strong, and the images are awesome....

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  6. @ Anoop
    imagE..! yah..

    @ Anirudh
    again d imagE..okay!

    @ Smruti
    dis 1z motion picture :)

    @ relations
    And the world I'm now in is so uninhabitable !

    @ d sinner
    'loving bikes more then men that ride them, i felt it all...'

    datz quite sumthiN .. :)

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  7. dropped here from sinners blog...dat was a pleasant read...vy different n creative

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  8. and i have no idea how but u just captured my love story right there in that poem!!!

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  9. nice poem.good blog. thanks for dropping by

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  10. @ ani
    lucky yoU!
    wots real for u..is a dream 4 me ..!

    @ mayz & rashmi
    :)

    @ singlewhe---

    :D :)

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  11. wow.......sheer class...totally in love with ambience created!

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  12. beautiful :)
    i can hear d echoes still :D

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  13. oh that was wonderful!
    just like someone said,
    it felt like a 10 sec motion picture! so vivid the imagery was
    it also made me sigh
    a lot of things seem to make me sigh these days but anyway!
    i loved it, truly
    :)

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  14. :) ..thanx Aman, Abhisek, Bhavya & Meghana ..

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  15. Woahhh!!!!!!! Wat r u!!!!!!!

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  16. @ Sam
    LoL!! m tryna figure that out 2..u cud help :)

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