~once

i am not asking you to

stay forever

all i want of you is that

we hold this moment in our hands

this moment

that we are together

alone~together


there is a distant circle of sinking orange

clouds have clothed the mountain

and soft strings from a guitar

fill our ears

we are more alive, than ever

and we want to dance


now, my feelings need not be held back

they can come down like lashes of rain

anytime, anywhere...

so wild so free


so i ask of you, to stay, now

let me live, let me cry, this once

This once...


i know, in love once is enough

like light for a blind eye

like wine for a parched loner

like you for me..












...I am so hungry, I can keep writing this poem forever, but it won't make any sense beyond this...I have said enough...I have had enough...It's time to call it off...~once 'n for all...




8 comments:

................your's entirely said...

are you really calling it off....once and for all?

ani said...

damn... it's even worse coz i echo it!

anirudh said...

thankyou for writing this,..

and i wana tell u that the sense that you write from isn the sense that is listed in the biological diaries

anirudh said...

thankyou for writing this,..

and i wana tell u that the sense that you write from isn the sense that is listed in the biological diaries

d gypsy! said...

what i need more than this...

wildflower said...

@ your's entirely
nah...thts hard..

@ ani
sigh..! so we know what itz like..

@ anirudh
now u l havta xplain that 2 me.. :P

@ gypsy
hmm..those dots..temme sumthin..

Julie said...
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CRD said...

i know, in love once is enough
like light for a blind eye
like wine for a parched loner
like you for me..


Like all things, even in love, once aint enuff. We crave only when its not there, and we crave for something or the other every time.

I wanna end a few things myself. For now lemme end this comment with a....

Cheers :)
CRD

updated my blog too