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every night, intoxicated by the relentless winds 
that the evening brings with itself,
when i stare out of my window
i see the moon, my moon
and write a letter to it
you say i am the mistress of words
but i am, 
a woman passionately in love


the glint in my eyes, ooze with enticement
don't they? 
the curve of the lip, hint of lust
you say i am narcissus's survivor
but i am
only a woman passionately in love


my thoughts, are luscious
virile like waves that dash with rocks
but coy as the ones that recede,
i melt in my lover's arms
you say i am a pure lunatic
but i let madness be undiluted,
i am a woman entwined in love..


eve was tricked into a temptation
i lived on as eve's dying wish..
a remnant of that yearning need..
un-numbed, 
you say i am a wildflower,
but i am 
only a woman madly in love

19 comments:

  1. ever notice the wind always comes from the direction of the Sun or Moon.. just think of it - why it is?

    lovely words.. very silken..

    just cool down the hot day..

    thank you - wild flower..

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  2. WoAAHHH!!!! wIld am tellin ya :)

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  3. oh grl...oh grl!!!!
    m speechless!!!!
    this was sensuous....
    wildflower personified!!!
    :-)

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  4. ok this was without doubt one of the best things i have read in long long time...simply awesome!!!

    **eve was tricked into a temptation
    i lived on as eve's dying wish..

    fantastic!!!

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  5. @ arvind
    anytym ;) i shd thank yu for readin..!

    @ sammY
    hmm..i can c dat :P

    @ Mansi
    aren't all of us are sensuous ..?
    btw nice pic :)

    @ Mayank
    :) desires are stronger than thoughts, aren't they?

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  6. An interrobang we used to call it: ?!

    Your love is intoxicating and expressed quite well.

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  7. @ goatman
    thnx..dinno dat :)

    @ rain crab
    u used 'again', so am i always like that ;)?

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  8. Its more like... My previous comment for one of ur posts was "Sensuous" so... i said "again... sensuous" ;)

    But its nice u knw... to express all deep dark feelings so boldly!!!

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  9. yea Rain..pent up feelins, can kill..

    i can call yu Rain, can't I :)

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  10. U can call me rain... that is my real name too ;)

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  11. Lady..You so take my heart away with your words..This is one outstanding post again!!!

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  12. woman madly in love :) True :P

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  13. @ N!V
    that way i shd have a collection of hearts by now ;) thnx :)

    @ S
    that's the way it has been since the beginning of time, and nothing unusual has happened lately ;) :P

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  14. Coming here again.
    This is fantastic..
    You have a way with words

    Great work!

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  15. thnx Sorcerer :) glad to have u here

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  16. This is the one wanted to comment on :)

    It is just an awesome expression & your words just captured it to perfection.. !

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  17. hmm..when everything else fails we revert to words.. :) thnx..

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  18. I love it, I love it, I love it!

    Who are you lady? How can you write what my heart screams out? How can you go through exactly what I go through?

    How can two women, madly in love; be this hurt?!?

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