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my love is sacred, it's outrageously passionate. it's irrational and uncompromising.
your love is moody. it switches between maddening heights and unknown depths, it kills me whenn it does that, bothways
my love is pathetically possessive of you, yours is nameless
my love paralyzes me, it is as unconditional as unconditional could get, it doesn't crave for your response, yet it does.
you hold me hostage, you dictate my mind's every move
i don't matter to you, you follow the faceless like a lunatic
your love is divine, mine is human, very human
i need you and youare insatiable
i stay up like an insane insomniac, watching you sleep
you are a rock, while i explode to your every touch

it's badly lopsided..

my loveis love
and yours is not

15 comments:

  1. certainly not made for each other

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  2. that was the alternative title i had though of

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  3. wild..
    a day me read ur old post..
    u going to a temple with ur dad..(instead of a shopping mal!!)
    me just compared that post with ur present posts..

    lot of clouds have been covered our life and shadow all the beautiful things..

    me just want a - flow of u in ur own nature.. which is quiet beautiful..

    me not read this post - but comment u in a day - after sink in to that feel..

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  4. Awsssummmmm!!!!!!! Ur thoughts r jus raw n u bring it up fresh n alive!!! Inspired writin??

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  5. @ Sam

    i wish it was js writin...

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  6. Mm its not js writin,. ppl don js write stuff!! words r jus picture perfect,. u hav the perfect mind for a writer,. rok on!!!

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  7. ex"my love is love
    and yours is not" :) and yet you/we all love! :)
    love is an endless pain in pleasure... :) one who can give pure love really can't escape this! we just keep loving no matter wat! :) beautifully emoted wild! :)

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  8. my loveis love
    and yours is not

    grossly unfair.....


    i refuse to aGree..
    apka karein to pyaar
    aur wo karein to b******r??

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  9. Sam..
    LoL again.. :D

    Rain..
    and u knw wot..i wanna give..give like i never thought i could!

    Lucky
    tujhse baad main nipati hun!!! :D

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  10. @ Rain, @ Wild - Wat happens wen u giv n giv n giv, wat happens at the END!!!?? ITs all ovr n still givn is a joy?? Self destructive pleasure!!!!!

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  11. @SAM: Can u help it??? c'mon! :)

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  12. sam,
    we can't help ourselves.. seriously..we are just designed tht way i guess.. :(

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  13. **my loveis love
    and yours is not

    Piercing lines....

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  14. :) true,. we ppl hav a name?? is ther a club for dis kinda givin :),. am already a member lookin out for exit!!!!!

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  15. @sam: i told ya... helpless romantics ;)

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