being lovelorn-this is how creative it can get


When we bid adieu the last time, I didn't even know that it would be the last time. I couldn't even mourn it. I couldn’t even weep. I had shout till my screams tore through these walls
I had beat myself to quieten myself, to calm my wrath.

My eyes wouldn't shed a tear, with the fear that tears wouldn't suffice. Nothing could even begin to console the loss that I had gained. Even today, when in solitude I wonder if you would really come back and beg to be pardoned at my feet and kiss my hands, and cry to be taken back.

You are the answer to all my silences. You can quieten my bleeding heart. Only you...

15 comments:

  1. Niva10/05/2007 08:26:00 AM

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  2. Niva10/05/2007 08:30:00 AM

    for some.. their screams juss die within them... they dont even have power to tear thru the walls...
    And the tears wont ever stop..it scares them to even think how so many of them can take birth in those tiny eyes... heh
    hey have read some of ur blogs... amazing writeups all....
    thanks for dropping by my page... :)

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  3. shubha10/06/2007 09:17:00 PM

    very poignant...n oh boy u can WRITE...!!!

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  4. Anirudh 'Lallan' Choudhry10/06/2007 10:30:00 PM

    beautiul...it takes some courage to write stuff like dis..bravo...!

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  5. iamnasra10/07/2007 12:28:00 AM

    as we are having at LIP (www.livinginpoetry.blogspot.com) honoring the voice of Mystic Rose..please join us and share your thoughts on Mystic Rose

    Thanks ..Nasra

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  6. IR10/07/2007 09:47:00 PM

    u write very well !

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  7. wildflower10/09/2007 01:34:00 AM

    Thanx People...MY BLOG IS ALIVE!
    Bingo!

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  8. relations10/09/2007 10:57:00 PM

    hey..
    there are a thousand people and things that are 'problems'..

    but there is only one person that is a 'solution'..
    this is, as they say, life..

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  9. Bishwanath Ghosh10/10/2007 05:12:00 PM

    Yes, I agree with those who left comments before me: You write very well :)

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  10. soumya mukerji10/11/2007 05:27:00 PM

    Love your words 'console the loss that I had gained...'... beautiful!

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  11. Amandeep Singh10/12/2007 08:50:00 PM

    This was Profound..yeah very much!

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  12. wildflower10/12/2007 09:08:00 PM

    @ relations
    ya..but we need to get over that single person(the solution) and carry on...because it rarely happens that the person turns back & spares us a moment..

    @ BG
    Naah! i write 'quite well'
    hahaha....

    @ Soumya
    Tanx :)

    @ Aman
    Is that the only word ('profound'<--) you get wen ur commenting on ma posts? :D kidding kidding!

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  13. Anand10/13/2007 09:42:00 PM

    the last para was seriously amazing

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  14. akialok10/13/2007 09:52:00 PM

    de facto is that wen u let others to take u for granted..such things happen ...its ur heart who wants to tune it to the lyrics of ny others heart bit..if u both cant synchronize this either's heart ll bleed...

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  15. wildflower10/23/2007 11:12:00 PM

    thanx Anand!

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