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Meek?
How meek?
How dumb?
What handicap can drive you to such horrendous depths of ignominy?
Why are you so shut up?

Have you lost everything you had?
Don' you have the will to survive further?
Tell me, what is it that is so killing you?
O’er the days, but it is…

C’mon!
Make an effort, darlin’
I’ll see you thru’
Try and make it happen

6 comments:

  1. --xh--4/16/2008 12:30:00 PM

    make an effort - itz worth it :)

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  2. relations4/16/2008 03:07:00 PM

    heya..

    u will make it thru.. surely..

    but to wat use..
    coz if th only single thing that one wished thru-out its life is not there than wats the use of 'making-it-thru'..

    but still..
    u will hav to mak it thru..coz there is no other option but to survive..

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  3. WritingsForLife4/17/2008 01:47:00 AM

    beautifully written :-)

    :-)

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  4. Anonymous4/17/2008 03:56:00 AM

    pile of CRAP!!!
    bull-shit
    horse-shit
    dog-shit.

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  5. wildflower4/17/2008 08:43:00 PM

    @ Anoop
    Sustained effort that is

    @ relations
    True...but i wanna make thru'

    @ raaji
    tx..tx..

    @ Anonymous
    Whatever!

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  6. Amandeep Singh4/23/2008 05:18:00 PM

    :)!
    said a lot already..havent I!

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