Do they look happy?
No, they don't, right?
Or may be they do...
But my shadow looks thinner, hai na?
And an inch or two taller, than I am.
O My hair! It looks like a tree...I hate that.
And you look like a tower.
And this is mischievous yaa'!
You look closer to me there, than you are.
It looks like we are holding hands or something like that.
But we aren't, right?
As we walk into the light
Our shadows dissolve in it
I turn to find you by my side
And see you're not here...

I had a cup of tea. That couldn’t quench my quest for warmth. I got another. When I left the table, I neatly arranged the two empty cups, and it looked like two people had been sitting there, and talking about life.
wow
ReplyDeletebahut sahi bola..
ReplyDeletecups talking..
u see life and love everywhere.
shadows... have lot to talk abou them.. will save it for a chat...
ReplyDeleteand the cups... kind of left me with a half emptiness... may be coz I have done it...
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ReplyDeleteA lot can happen over coffee!! so try coffee nxt time.
ReplyDeleteNice one!!
I loved your write up after the poem. Not that i didnt like the poem but i could relate to the write up in a lot of ways...
ReplyDeletesahi hai yaar .. lol
ReplyDeleteloved the poetry! was beautiful!
ReplyDelete@ anirudh
ReplyDeleteyea..i get that wow!
@ Smruti
Do i? U wud knw better ;)
@ Anoop
u get a deja vu wen u talk to me :D
@ the gamer
ty..ty!
@ raaji
the poem?
I stare at shadows, i chase them and end up nowhere. And whenevr i m walking alone and am lukin at my own shadow, i make a silent wish that someday there would be my soul-mate/alter-ego walking right beside, holding hands. And this poem about his shadow & mine, about our shadow...
@ payal
LoL?
@ matangi mawley
thanx :)
nice.....
ReplyDeleteI know that feeling all too well of being alone in a crowd somewhere far far away...
ReplyDeletelovely piece of writing.. quite charmed by the exactness of the placing of the 2 mugs.. (one needs to be oh so very precise in such things doesn't one!! )
that was a cool one !!!
ReplyDeletefantastic
poetic soul you are. ahhh its THAT age, pining for companionship eh?
ReplyDeletei'm a big fan of ur writing babes! u neva fail to 'wow' me wid every post..kudos!
ReplyDeletem so glad :)
ReplyDeletetnx :)