To whoever!

Dear flirts, why don’t you understand?
No matter how you make your ways grand
You are things, I just can’t stand

Every time you meet some chick
Graceful, cute and chic
Or spectacled, lonely and a geek

You will have more ways to devise
To make her realize
That it’s she you fantasize

Talk to her through out the night
You skillfully intersperse that talk with an endearing fight
Tell her she’s the most beautiful, to her very delight

Hold her hands
Sink your fangs
Frame your phrases with such brilliance

Unaware of your flirtatious flair
Of your heart other females could demand an equal share
Had she known, she would slit your throat without a care

When will you feel?
That the wounds of love take long to heal
And it is tough for her, to renew that old zeal

Haven’t you by now slaked your thirst?
Settle down; look for your right woman first
Think love forever and not just one night of lust

30 comments:

Amandeep Singh said...

Beautifully said!
and strongly

:)

Anirudh 'Lallan' Choudhry said...

beautifully said for sure..u seem so hit by this ..some of the strong points u put here..!

Anand said...

nice flow. I suppose i cant say nethin vaguely flirtatious, but r u single?
:)

akialok said...

the world is a trip and everybody is a hypocrite
Need to stop ah , taking a look at the other
But keep your hearts open
Be what you wanna be now
Let us heal the confusion

relations said...

hey..
wow..
long time issue you have raised and that too with a rhyming scheme.. :-)
great job..
everything you've written is more than true..

**the wounds of love take long to heal..

then there is one odd guy out of a thausand who..
might not want to share A's tears but wants to share his laughter with A..
who might not want to indulge in A's pain but will make A indulge into his happiness..
but..

the 999 guys will not allow this to happpen.

wildflower said...

I am so glad, men dint shy away from commenting on this post!

@ Aman
But how many men will care to change?:P

@ Anirudh
yeah..many women are hit..initially they do take it as an offense, later on..they just havta avoid it... :D

@ Anand
Yeah! I AM...LoLzzz

@ Alok
*GRIN**GIGGLE*GRIN*

@ Relations
thanx..The 'A' phenomenon..cudnt relate it wid ma poem..

BTW, u got one real great blog...love reading it!!!Almost a fan yaar

relations said...

A is a girl who has become cynical because of her experiencies..

wildflower said...

@ relations

I do not exactly encourage the activities of that one guy...but if he shares his laughter, genuinely, with the A, then it's nice...He shouldn't be fake like flirts are..That's all!

WritingsForLife said...

ahh... boys will always be boys!!

arunima said...

wow...
well said ;)

Ashvini Kumar S K said...

Bravo!

Well Said

Niva said...

Reminds me of a line from Paulo coehlo’s book,
“No one can manipulate anyone else. In any relationship, both parties know what they’re doing, even if one of them complains later on that they were used.”

zzz-writer said...

you have a point!!!

The Wandering Hermit said...

I think you are confusing Flirtation with Casual Sex here.. They are 2 vastly different things.. not all flirtations end up with the latter some start and stop way before..

Amandeep Singh said...

Well...with few types of gals I ve seen ..I think gals are changing for sure;)..

(how r yaaa?)

Tamsin said...

If life was all true love and constancy, can u imagine how dull we would be?? for those who haven't met their would-be's yet..for those still lost in the dreams of impending youth..for those who do not yet have the courage to accept the stark reality of commitment..well, u r denyin them the pleasure to be had from touching too[;)]...I mean it; coz' m 1 such female.so inspite of being one of the other sex,i give free license 2 men 2 go philander, expectin no less from them wd regard 2 our liberties too...

wassay??

wildflower said...

@arunima & ashvini

tx...tx...

@ niva

may be i am biased by gender...but u know there do exist..naive girls and shrewd men...fake men...flirtateous men....

@ zzz writer

definitely i do...n m lovin the feedback i am getting from you guys:)

@ raaji

that means i will hav to continue blogging against flirts/..FOREVER?
:O

@ hermit

well..i was talking about the intentions some men have, the intentions with which they begin to flirt with some girl u know/

Pri said...

quite a strong poem...

well done! :)

Seema said...

aWESOME!!!

wildflower said...

@ Aman
thanx to guys like you, some girls can change :D
hahahha

@ being just me
true love is not that dull, is it?
and flirting is okay, if both the sides are aware that is it flirting and there is nothing serious about it...none of them should feel cheated and used after the affair is over...

and i know the mood and the mishief :)

@ pri & fullmoononearth
thanx :)

Amrita Sabat said...

amazin piece of wrk...............but flirts will remain flirts..........dey pretty mch take pride in deir capabilities of wooing...poor fellows are starved of some real love aftr all the fakeness......:P

wildflower said...

Amrita...
Hmmmm...all they deserve is pity..god save (me from) them! LoL

annie said...

Wildflower i wanna give u a standing ovation for this...i loved loved loved this poem..shares my feelings towards men community. Mind if i link your name with ur post on my blog to share?

soumya mukerji said...

That's so true.. amazing poem!!!

wildflower said...

@ soumya & annie
hmmm...thank you yaaron...vented my frustration of years in this one!

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wildflower said...

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The Rain Crab said...

wow.. i jus read this!!! powerful!!! loved it!