Alive!

i'l take ma mind on a long ride
chew the stick of that lollipop till it makes me nauseatic
lie down on ma bed, look at the burst of colors in the sky
look at the boughs of the old coconut give up to the wind

watch ma skin go up in blisters as the sun pours down
one vehicle after another, spitting smoke on ma face

tho' i haven' reached a stalemate
life is just a lil sluggish
i'm running slow
breathing slow
...& i'm alive...

'coz that's all one can ever be!

PS: If at all I made you think, that this was just another shitty piece of poetry, you're mistaken
what you read was ma 200th post...!

8 comments:

--xh-- said...

200 and counting strong :) congratz da :) be alive and never lety the enthu die :)

Smruti Ranjan said...

my happy wishes..
u keep walking..and keep writing lot more thoughtful posts

Abhishek Khanna said...

:)

♥bμşγ-ŵŗϊŧēŕ♥ said...

:) may you have more such milestones!

(¯`•._.•[Raaji]•._.•´¯) said...

it is actually quite well written :-)

The Soul of Alec Smart said...

Hey wildflower,

Glad you liked that post by me. I'm still trying to figure this one you put down here.. anyway, congrats on the 200th! Keep writing!!

- N
http://a-dark-comedy-called-life.blogspot.com

The Soul of Alec Smart said...

:) thankee! love some of your old posts i read right now.

Gonecase said...

Nice page you've got here. Thanks for dropping by !