The lazy afternoon was surprised by a thunderstorm.
The one you are never ready for. And you are stuck in
the most mundane of places without an umbrella or
anything. I was getting back home, ealier than usual.
And the rain on my windshield felt nice.

The highway was almost deserted. But I saw someone
and screeched back. And I lowered the glass to see
her. She was drenched under her skin. A strand of wet
hair fell on her face as she bent down to say hi.

'Hmm...Yea', she smiled.
'Need a ride?' I asked and waited for her to say 'No, I'l
get a cab'.

-To be continued..?


Anonymous said...

"....'Need a ride?' I asked and waited for her to say 'No, I'l
get a cab...."
I wud rather be dying to see her get in.

I thought u were busy with ur mids... but u come up with salsa the night before... seems like the "final yr-masti maaro" thingy has got into UR head too..

Btw, u hav been tagged.

P.S: ajnabi sehar, sunsan gali, barish, besahara ladki ... sounds bollywood to me... :P

--xh-- said...

waiting for the next part....

Vijayshryaln said...

how a stranded mind will leave ur car??

The Furobiker said...

je kya hai

atleast ek chapter to poora likhna tha na

wise good start

WritingsForLife said...

that is quite an awkward place to leave it, dont you think?

Unknown said...

Waiting to know what happens next! Write soon!

P said...

Yes! :)

Moksha said...

what next :O

wildflower said...

@ wordsmith
tho he like u wanted her to get in, girls dun generally do tht...do tey :D

@ xh, Vijay, abhishek, raaji, akanksha, crap blogger
d next part, i guess l b up soon !

@ Priya
Yes! ;)

Anirudh 'Lallan' Choudhry said...


Unknown said...

Please leave her there, i am about to reach that spot! need a girl to hit on, and this sounds like a golden opportunity!i will give her the lift.
thank you in advance

wildflower said...

@ none
but i wonder if the girl will trust yu for a lift!.. i reely wonder