Away and away
And one day, we continue as perfect strangers...
Is that it? This is what a break up is?
From today on, we cease to love each other...Full stop?
We separate because, we fail to understand each other, unlike yesterday...
Or was it a mistake that we ever came together...? Was love a mistake?
We call it off...the buzz stays for a day or two, and then fades into distant memory...
The storm ends, the dust settles down.
How feasible is it for us to wipe it all out, and look for new love?
I know a guy who when they split, wished that she find better love...!
He wrote her a beautiful poem , asking her to remember him, whenever she is awake late in the night, whenever she walked alone in the snow...whenever the raw feel of fresh feelings moistened her heart, if ever again..!
And for those who didn’t feel like commenting on my last post here is something...
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Though the love has left… a remnant remains
It continues to live as a part of me
The story that failed to complete, irks the heart in lonely evenings…
And whenever I feel the petals of a rose pressed neatly somewhere in my diary
And whenever I look at the road that looks so empty
And whenever I feel my pulse, trying to find out if I am alive
But now that it’s high time, people say
I should’ve become indifferent and numb
Even then, the numbness remains…
Love doesn die…
13 comments:
the poem at the end was so beautiful...it struck somewhere deep inside me...
ofcrse love doesnt die...
beautiful.........:)
i think dats d real beauty of bein writers...........wat we see we can stretch and more importantly feel the feelings even maybe without experiencing it in reality.........its d beauty of being spectators, who r nt really spectators- dey r ppl with imaginations makin dem actually experience the magic- the happiness, the pain, the hurt, the xtasy, the addiction, the kindness, the emotions.........
If it dies it wouldnt be true love..
aint it?
if it is true ...it can never die...
:) simple...aint it?
Very true wildflower. Love does not die easily. Patience does. Numbness might set in quickly but it takes time for your heart to heal completely.
@ Sunil
may be...no idea!
@ amrita
yea, u always get me right :)
i have indeed stretched my imagination to feel like someone i am not...without being in it, i have felt the astronomical levels of joy that love gives...the pain that has pushed me down many an abyss!...and all this sitting right in front of a computer...DOinG NothinG!
@ Aman & d sinner
True Love??? *hiccups!*
Everytime i am into it, luks like true love, then when i am out of it...looks so much unlike it!!! y?
@ solitaire
;) hmmmmmmh!
beautiful... loved the poem in the end.. ur abso right actually.. love never dies, bt then some feelings dry down, some part of the heart becomes numb i suppose, bt then i doubt the wound heals that quickly..
for wht i feel about love, is a beautiful feeling, without which i feel i m dead indeed..
and that's wht i've been feeling from quite a long time.. no love, no life..
-R
Another visitor
i agree but this is how life rolls, you meet people and whether we like it or not, sometimes we have to let them go.
:-(
very true to the peron whos written it..!
Beautiful... it's as if reflecting what I feel at the moment...
dats life!!
sad n true!
@ rohit <--anoder visiter ;)
Love might be a necessity for survival but it brings in a lot of Happyness
@ raaji
and let dem go 4 good!
Cheers!
@ anirudh...
hmmmh...i indeed hold it very close to my heart..i live it yaa.. :)
@ soumya
girl, i take dat as a compliment nw :D
@ gunj
nice name han :)
'dats life!!
sad n true'
=> lyf's saD but truE
Love doesn die… :)never
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