A dusk
Sunset has colored the sky
And we're biking into infinity
A speed so high
That I cant breathe anymore
That the wind pierces into my skin
To breakfree
I let my hands off your shoulders
Stretch them out and scream our names
I wait
For my voice to strike a mountain
And come back to me
But sad
Our names get lost in the air
I bite my lips & you turn back
Your small eyes
A spark of mischief in them
And you gimme goosebumps
I die
When your lips twist
And the smile reaches the whole of your cheeks
Later
I smile to myself
And I pat my back, I've loved a rebel
Sunset has colored the sky
And we're biking into infinity
A speed so high
That I cant breathe anymore
That the wind pierces into my skin
To breakfree
I let my hands off your shoulders
Stretch them out and scream our names
I wait
For my voice to strike a mountain
And come back to me
But sad
Our names get lost in the air
I bite my lips & you turn back
Your small eyes
A spark of mischief in them
And you gimme goosebumps
I die
When your lips twist
And the smile reaches the whole of your cheeks
Later
I smile to myself
And I pat my back, I've loved a rebel
18 comments:
wow.. just wow.. a biking-love poem... i loved the mental image of a couple, pillion stretching her hands apart...biking to infinity... :)
nice one da...
beautiful...splendid..took my heart away.. wow,,,
n me being a biker.. it just stood on my imaginative grounds.. i am jealous of the picture this poem portrays...
beautiful yaa..!
romantic.. brilliant
an imaginative mind...
a very beautiful poem...
and the careful choice of words bring such a vivid set of actions like a 10 secs motion picture..
long live wildflower!! :)
read this..
re-read..
looked into monitor for 10 minutes doing noting..
and then went into some other universe..
there is a world that we all dream, a world we love, a world that comes to us...
a world that does not stay..
wow....
loving bikes more then men that ride them, i felt it all...
the imagination holds strong, and the images are awesome....
@ Anoop
imagE..! yah..
@ Anirudh
again d imagE..okay!
@ Smruti
dis 1z motion picture :)
@ relations
And the world I'm now in is so uninhabitable !
@ d sinner
'loving bikes more then men that ride them, i felt it all...'
datz quite sumthiN .. :)
dropped here from sinners blog...dat was a pleasant read...vy different n creative
and i have no idea how but u just captured my love story right there in that poem!!!
nice poem.good blog. thanks for dropping by
woaah....
awesome.....
@ ani
lucky yoU!
wots real for u..is a dream 4 me ..!
@ mayz & rashmi
:)
@ singlewhe---
:D :)
B E A U T I F U L ! !
wow.......sheer class...totally in love with ambience created!
beautiful :)
i can hear d echoes still :D
oh that was wonderful!
just like someone said,
it felt like a 10 sec motion picture! so vivid the imagery was
it also made me sigh
a lot of things seem to make me sigh these days but anyway!
i loved it, truly
:)
:) ..thanx Aman, Abhisek, Bhavya & Meghana ..
Woahhh!!!!!!! Wat r u!!!!!!!
@ Sam
LoL!! m tryna figure that out 2..u cud help :)
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