You have a fairer color
A slender figure
And hair never out of order
A smaller face
A gait of better grace
And earrings that heighten his craze
Eyes deliquescent
More intoxicating a scent
With my man, may you never repent
Dexterous fingers, polished nails
And to share with him, a lot better tales
Things very rare
A voluptuous stare
Inestimable care
It’s got something to do
With your lowered gaze
Enthralled, he is always full of praise
About your lips that lure
Your eye balls azure
Your person, so demure
Enough!
Let me cut it short
With you, may he never flirt
May neither heart ever break
I know the ache is too much to take
Take good care of this man…
After all, you will grow his clan!!!
16 comments:
lovely poem...May i ask,Is it inspired frm real life?
Beautiful..... whether from experience or just a wild inspiration streak.....
nikhil,
well...i l keep that a secret!!!LoLzzzz...this is just what the chocolate girls arnd ccd wud look like if they wer letters!!!
subbu,
thanx so much :D
Now what do I say..
Just beautiful work ..I was thinkin n limiting it to mere observation..U go much much deeper and ahead!
aman,
thnx dude...
i stress the heart as i dunt stress the head :D
hey.. tht was a beautiful piece of poetry!
n thnx 4 u'r comments.. i feel so honoured!
you are a truly prolific poet ...... [:)]...beautiful work !!
matangi mawley,
ur blog is a treat for the senses...
n thanx :)for visiting mine:)
transcending silence,
i do write one poem a day, but this is the first one that rhymed :D
thanx :)
thanks mate... by the way you have an awesome way with words.
thanx :D come back for more...:P
lovely, rhyming even if its d first time
thnx :D
hav sum more comin up!!!
good one....very crafty
...love the layout ofur blog...great artistic sense i must say
thancss..:P
i owe it to a fellow blogger
wow... pretty cool. Very creative idea :-)
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