To the someone who ceased to exist for me:-
I shall be waiting your way to return
Sans you life is not that much fun
Colors go pale
And its things look so stale
Eyes with expectations galore
With every moment, they grow more and more
Every gust of passing breeze
Makes my heart freeze
May be it is you again
I unlock my door, but all in vain
Waiting for you maketh no sense
Oh! I am filled with so much vengeance
That agony of rejection and betrayal
Would never fall short of such a portrayal
Your smile, your love, your sense of humor
Thinking of them now, fills me with rancor
But your, memories don’t leave me alone
And I am always stranded in the days bygone
Soulful music doesn’t satisfy
And all borders does my heart defy
The past gives me a painful spasm
Your void has filled me with sarcasm
With you gone forever
I can’t even respond to any other admirer
But you have to take things in your stride
In order to live and not just survive
13 comments:
Please try Boozing and it will go away...
Forget him ..everyone shall cease to exist for U..
U ll thank me for this!
Wow..Eva..man u write so well..u have hidden talents bcoming better and better
great...
dont worry babe..its all for good..
The last line is telling.
the lad,
u suggest the brand?
aman,
-do-
shraddha,
ya, this one was to invite consolation on the internet :D
what's in a name?,
well what does it tell you?
..in order to live and not just survive.. says it all!
live and have fun.. and someone else will enjoy your vivacity. :)
"With you gone forever
I can’t even respond to any other admirer
But you have to take things in your stride
In order to live and not just survive"
its a tuf thing to do and u surely get my sympathies... :P
i am checking your page after a month now... been busy lately..
Heart always longs for what cannot be.
The pain translates into--
Poetry.
Could relate.
@ mystic rose
i shall try...for sure!
@ krishna
ohhw, come back more often :D
@ ps
"Heart always longs for what cannot be.
The pain translates into--
Poetry." HOW TRUE!!!
"But you have to take things in your stride
In order to live and not just survive"
just sums it up..
PS nice tacky layout!!
First love they say is the hardest to forget, harder still I guess to keep it lasting!!!
You sound just as inspired as I was when I was betrayed!!Or so I thought!!
Endeavour life and you ll notice the beauty even thru the bad times...thts wat I say, now that I have discovered love as it really is...smile!!It gonna be alright!!!
Beautiful rhyme!!!Meaning and the means is what I realte to!!!
Wollaahh!!!
i guess three fourths of the worlds population can relate to this rhyme....
its really good....
and the last 2 lines show that ur a survivor....and have the capacity to be truly happy again....
yeah...the admirer part is soooo unfortunate...but soo true!!..lol..
cheers girl!!
@ ankit
ur name reminds me of someone! lol:D thanx for the comment btw
@ anshul
u thought u were betrayed? i guess i can relate to that
@ vitruvian
thanx girl & kudos to my survivor spirit :D
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