every night, intoxicated by the relentless winds
that the evening brings with itself,
when i stare out of my window
i see the moon, my moon
and write a letter to it
you say i am the mistress of words
but i am,
a woman passionately in love
the glint in my eyes, ooze with enticement
don't they?
the curve of the lip, hint of lust
you say i am narcissus's survivor
but i am
only a woman passionately in love
my thoughts, are luscious
virile like waves that dash with rocks
but coy as the ones that recede,
i melt in my lover's arms
you say i am a pure lunatic
but i let madness be undiluted,
i am a woman entwined in love..
eve was tricked into a temptation
i lived on as eve's dying wish..
a remnant of that yearning need..
un-numbed,
you say i am a wildflower,
but i am
only a woman madly in love
19 comments:
ever notice the wind always comes from the direction of the Sun or Moon.. just think of it - why it is?
lovely words.. very silken..
just cool down the hot day..
thank you - wild flower..
WoAAHHH!!!! wIld am tellin ya :)
oh grl...oh grl!!!!
m speechless!!!!
this was sensuous....
wildflower personified!!!
:-)
ok this was without doubt one of the best things i have read in long long time...simply awesome!!!
**eve was tricked into a temptation
i lived on as eve's dying wish..
fantastic!!!
@ arvind
anytym ;) i shd thank yu for readin..!
@ sammY
hmm..i can c dat :P
@ Mansi
aren't all of us are sensuous ..?
btw nice pic :)
@ Mayank
:) desires are stronger than thoughts, aren't they?
An interrobang we used to call it: ?!
Your love is intoxicating and expressed quite well.
Again strong and sensuous!!!
@ goatman
thnx..dinno dat :)
@ rain crab
u used 'again', so am i always like that ;)?
Its more like... My previous comment for one of ur posts was "Sensuous" so... i said "again... sensuous" ;)
But its nice u knw... to express all deep dark feelings so boldly!!!
yea Rain..pent up feelins, can kill..
i can call yu Rain, can't I :)
U can call me rain... that is my real name too ;)
Lady..You so take my heart away with your words..This is one outstanding post again!!!
woman madly in love :) True :P
@ N!V
that way i shd have a collection of hearts by now ;) thnx :)
@ S
that's the way it has been since the beginning of time, and nothing unusual has happened lately ;) :P
Coming here again.
This is fantastic..
You have a way with words
Great work!
thnx Sorcerer :) glad to have u here
This is the one wanted to comment on :)
It is just an awesome expression & your words just captured it to perfection.. !
hmm..when everything else fails we revert to words.. :) thnx..
I love it, I love it, I love it!
Who are you lady? How can you write what my heart screams out? How can you go through exactly what I go through?
How can two women, madly in love; be this hurt?!?
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