like a broken bangle
and like the remnant of the moon that stays till the morning sky
like an unsaid word
like a fire doused before it became all ash

you left me,


incomplete

4 comments:

Vagabond said...

like a fire doused before it became all ash

reminds of a line i wrote:
kill me but then let me die.

(¯`•._.•[Raajii]•._.•´¯) said...

usually wounded hearts cant. You'd think they would but they dont. One has to sane in order to help the other messed up one. Sigh.

Good piece. :-)

wildflower said...

@ Vagabond
i am in lovewith all the pain he gives me..wot do ido!

@ Raaaji
i c..thnks :)

Vagabond said...

i know that feeling!
it is great while it lasts...but then well you know...
one advice make sure you have loads of chocolates. during that phase of my life i made sure i had a dairy milk on me all the time.