like a broken bangle
and like the remnant of the moon that stays till the morning sky
like an unsaid word
like a fire doused before it became all ash

you left me,


incomplete

4 comments:

Vagabond said...

like a fire doused before it became all ash

reminds of a line i wrote:
kill me but then let me die.

WritingsForLife said...

usually wounded hearts cant. You'd think they would but they dont. One has to sane in order to help the other messed up one. Sigh.

Good piece. :-)

wildflower said...

@ Vagabond
i am in lovewith all the pain he gives me..wot do ido!

@ Raaaji
i c..thnks :)

Vagabond said...

i know that feeling!
it is great while it lasts...but then well you know...
one advice make sure you have loads of chocolates. during that phase of my life i made sure i had a dairy milk on me all the time.